In the name of GOD
In the name of God; the good deeds
begin,
In the name
of God; Scamps purge their sin.
In the name
of God; there are tears, jeers & Laughter,
In the name
of God; there’s inhumane Slaughter.
In the name
of God; some make a living,
Truth is
the riches are thriving.
In
the name of God; Society is blinded,
That’s
how the people are divided.
God’s
everywhere, where science can’t reach,
Over the
centuries this absurd theory did they preach.
None’s
ready to accept unknowing’s the limitation,
We bow our
heads to a few vested human interpretations.
Dozen in a
score questioned of the existence,
The antagonists,
nothing but did them Silence!
I’ve
met none so far, who’s seen and talked,
No
doubt, billions of pages on falsity are chalked.
Nobody knows
if it’s a Human invention,
To keep
ashore, the disguised primal intention.
No wonder,
it’s a strong binding force,
Its
influence on the minds today is coarse.
Some say,
nothing’s beyond human reach.
Well, why
ain’t god seen to everyone and each?
Do
not burden all with the theories unresolved,
Science
is where, the myths are solved!
One of the most beautiful poems I ve read
ReplyDeleteBut sadly, it’s a topic I dread
You are at your prime in this work of art. As a man of god, I’m somewhat offended. But i do not digress on anything you ve said. What you ve said is completely true. Religion has bred a lot of violence and hatred but i can assure you... all this is a human mis-understanding. One day soon enough, all of mankind will know that. But I’m afraid it'll be too late by then....
The structure is beautiful. But the beauty lies betwixt the cleverly concealed verses. What is this disguised primal intention you speak of? I have made an opinion but I’m not sure if that right. Sarcasm pours through the words here, embellishing religion and faith which comes from it to all the believers. I have seen this in others, how faith can blind someone. People who mistake tradition and culture for religion show this the most.
You have picked the right words for every other line. It looks like you ve literally waited hours maybe days or weeks for the right word to come. The symmetry and complacence are there, hiding in every line. The reader will be pleased to notice them.
great work chetan bhai...!!! beautifully crafted piece of work..!!!!!
ReplyDeletethough it'll hurt religious person but it is exactly what the reality is ...
Awesome.....but, my theory is still the same...God is not true....but, we need god for our society :)
ReplyDeleteChetan,
ReplyDeleteI liked the poem, Its simple and very conveniently convey what you want to convey. Since i know you, it has not come as a surprise. By reading the title i could guess exactly what you would have written and i was not wrong.
Though i dont agree with every verse over there , nonetheless its is beautifully written. Its a combination of wit and sarcasm.
But i feel you have just scratched the surface, there was more you could have added i am sure. But nonetheless it ended on a very high note.
Good one
nice poem...
ReplyDeletethough very controversial.. but beautifully crafted...
i agree Krishna: god is very essential for the society...